Third draft. Edits that were made:

  • Took out repeated wording about Supply Yard


Second draft. Edits that were made:

  • 1Mission team detected some weird sounds in the music track around 0:35 which made it distracting. Jay found the sound and it was low talking from the music track.  After re-arranging the song, the low talking was taking out.
  • 1Mission team mentioned graphics were a little glitchy when they swoop in. The title screen now has no glitch and fades in smoothly on screen.
  • Font for title screen was updated to Proxima Nova font as well as the green line set to match the branding color #7CC246 for the green.